One-half of Deux Lectrices, writing about the things I read.
Why has the book suddenly shifted from either Finley POV to Jasper's, or made Finley's POV an omniscient one? We're getting Jasper's thoughts without a break to show that something has switched. In fact, the book went from Mary Sue Finley and co sitting down to dinner to being at Jasper's house arrest "prison".